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Cover : 2.5 / 5 Firstly, you didn't give a proper picture or proper cover to that OS and if I judge the main cover of the book then I don't think it is attractive enough....It can be better.
Title : 3.5 / 5 The title is matching with the storyline but the only thing is it is so common.....most of the people use this title.
Description : 2 / 5 You only write in book description that OS TS will be posted here but you can make it a little interesting even if you can write the names of the books .....if I am judging as OS description then you write that destiny gives them betrayal but in actuality behir gave betrayal to anu.
Length : 10 / 10 Length is enough... It contains sufficient things.
Plot : 6.5 / 10 I don't think the plot is really good...like seriously firstly she is so young secondly more than having the guilt of her sister suicide due to them...she is feeling bad that mahir buy her.
Grammar : 3.5 / 5 Having some grammatical errors.
Overall impression : 5 / 10 The OS is quite good but I may suggest you that you should add a proper picture like cover in media and also give a nice description to book and cover also.
Cover : 3 / 5 The cover is nice but it can be more perfect , the emotions are matching with the story but it is not attractive enough.
Title : 3 / 5 The title sounds nice but the story is not only about Bela it also contains Mahir's side even if you mention that both sisters will love the same person even if it is a bit long.
Description : 4 / 5 The description is really Interesting but the only thing is you write exactly the same in introduction.....if you can then change a bit.
First Impression : 8 / 10 The starting is good...you tell every sufficient thing about the characters even the story starts nicely but some things are strange like firstly bela blush when shravani teases her with the name of mahir then she immediately agrees happily to marry shankar.
