MyStreet: Ashter (MyStreet x OC) Book 1 (COMPLETED)

OC Review/FanFic review

Hey guys! Since S1 is over, I wanted to give my full review!

Relationships:

Ashter became friends with mostly everyone. Mostly.

Aphmau: Very amazing friends, Ashter did have a tiny bit of feelings for her, but when Aphmau gave him a peck on the cheek during Christmas day, he started developing feelings for her. But when Ashter took Katelyn to dinners to 'hang out', Ashter began talking to her more than he expected.

Katelyn: Nicknamed 'Kate' by Ashter mostly, Ashter wasn't friends with her due to the fact Katelyn didn't trust him. But after a while, the two went to dinners every weekend and started hanging out with each other more out of that restaurant. I guess couples do get together at that restaurant -Zianna 2016/20. But, Ashter soon developed feelings for her when the two learned their interests. The two LOVED sport like things. Although Ashter doesn't watch them or do them, the two liked getting in shape more than anything, when A-Con 2016 came, Ashter knew the time was right to ask her to be his girlfriend. Which she said yes, making this the BIGGEST alternation to the regular timeline.

Kawaii~Chan: Good friend and colleague, they work together with Aphmau in the maid cafe, and the two bake sweets together. Although Ashter hates the third person talk, he got used to it. Kawaii~Chan is the reason Ashter knows how to bake Ashter knows how to bake cakes and cupcakes because of her.

Garroth: Acquaintances Ashter talks to him from time to time, when Ashter had feelings for Aphmau, he became angry with him and the guys most of the time when trying to take her. Lucinda noticed it when teasing Ashter sometimes.

Laurance: Similar to Garroth's, Laurance is just like him.

Dante: Isn't like the two, Ashter kept a nice relationship between the two.

Travis: Ashter's rival, the two clash to win over Katelyn, even in the future he'll still do it.

Zane: They're friends, he's the reason Ashter collects ponies, but Ashter doesn't watch the show. Ashter has around 76 ponies in his collection, but Ashter collects limited edition ones, so 10 are normal ones and 66 are limited edition. He has a good amount of wealth-

Lucinda: They met in the Mythical Realm via papers, but there seems to be more to them. They're Potion Buddies. Lucinda is the prime reason Ashter learned to use Healing Spells fully again. Well, to an extent.

Aaron: They're friends. Though it seems there is more to them than meets the eye...

Nicole: They're friends, Ashter respects the twos friendship and stays away from Katelyn while she hangs out with her.

Jeffery: Doesn't like him, he drags Katelyn into things she didn't want to do. But Ashter does seem to remember him a bit...

Abby: She's a fortune teller. Ashter is Abby's 'Unkie' and she likes him a lot, due to Ashter's story of taking care of kids in College.

Doge: Ashter's dog since he was 14. Had her for 12 years. She's an old little girl. But she accidentally stepped into Ashter's potion room in college and spilled an 'Age Reversal' potion which causes her to go back to being a newborn puppy again. Although with a mind of a 4-year, she retained her energy within. She got used to it. This was in Ashter's college years. She is a chihuahua. She is currently about 12 years mentally and 8 years old physically.

Celestia: Aphmau's dog and Doge's best friend. Celestia took a liking to Ashter as she did with Aaron, to an extent.

Michi~Chan: Enemy, she tried to steal Aaron from Aphmau and used a Love Potion on Aphmau to get her to be with Zane, thank God she doesn't know that all potions didn't last forever... Or does she?

Zianna: New friend, but it seems the two met before. Although it seems it was not in person.

Ashter's mom: Amazing mother, but someone left Witchcraft supplies for him, it seems they were given to him by someone beyond Ashter's reach...

Ashter Lake

Age- 26 (As of MyStreet S1)

Birthday: October 16

Species- Wizard (Descendant but in
reality he is only human
with an amazing grasp of magic)

Human (Just a descendant of a
Witch/Wizard of his great
grandparents and beyond)

Appearance:

Eye Color- Silver (Natural)
(Eye Color/Glow) Red-When Using Fire Spells/Angered
(Glow) White- When using Wind Spells
(Glow) Lime Green- When using Healing Spells
(Glow) Yellow- When using Barrier Spells

Hair Color- Black (Shoulder-Blade length)

Skin Color: Slightly Tanned (Before moving to MyStreet and current)

Height- About 5ft6 (As of MyStreet
S1, which is considered 'average')

Weight- Around 150 Pounds

Occupations- PDH (Formally)
PDU (Formally)
Phoenix Children Hospital (Formally)
Five Nights at Freddy's (Formally)
Maid Cafe (Current)

Address- 65 MyStreet (MyStreet S1)

Hobbies: Ashter likes to exercise
every morning and night.

Potion Making (He has SHELVES and SHELVES dedicated to the potions he collects/makes.)

Gem Collecting (He had a case dedicated to these gems, these also have smaller shelves for the
gems to be placed separately. His
favorite being Garnets)

Past Life: Not much was talked about Ashter's past life. Although there have been speculations that Ashter remembers some of the friends he made...

Thanks for reading my fanfic! I do hope to release another book after this! Or is it about to be released...?

FanFic Review

It felt rushed to me, but I did enjoy it. I do like how I tried to implement my OC in MyStreet and I hope to also do it in the next one too. The story was still choppy and rushed but I am building my storytelling skills. Hopefully, the next fanfic is even better.

Note: Happy Holidays! Hope you all have a good holiday and a good New Year's Eve!!!

Note: "Phoenix Drop High: Ashter's Story" has been out! Check it out by checking out my profile, and thank you for everything guys, I wouldn't have been here if it wasn't for your willingness to read my fanfic ;w;