The Other Biersack [COMPLETED]

So I'm new here and I would love you guys to read this fanfic that I'm writing and just give me a few words of the wise. Tell me what I should work on and leave me ideas if you could that would be great. I love to get corrected cause I'm not perfect so don't be shy. If you want to know how I update it's simple really. I write the story out by hand then post it little by little. It's that way or write it out by hand, post what I have done and continue to write until I finish then post the rest. So this story is basically about the life of Jane Biersack, Andy Biersack's sister and her crazy life as the little sister of a rock star. She's 17 years old and goes through what normal 17 year olds do, but with a little bit of something more. I hope you enjoy!!