This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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Unexpectedly free today, so I'm back to update my first ever story. Of course, I wrote two OS and one book yet to be update. Can't believe that I persuaded myself to write a story considering how introvert I am. My brothers tease me that I can literally live on a stranded island for the rest of my life..!! Like seriously..😅😅 (*Even I think I can do that..!!*)
So my book has reached 1k votes..!!! Can't believe that people are reading my stories. (*Guess, writing is my hidden talent.*)
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Rajmata: (sternly) Manyata, Jay..!! (They break the hug) Aap dono gaadi se bahar kyu nahi khood gayi thi? Guards aap dono ko bacha lete na? (Both remain silent and bow down their heads looking at floor. Just then, Brij-Giri enter in.)
Brijraj: Manyata beta, ab aap ki tabiyat kaisi hai? Jay beta aap theek hai na? (Hugging both of them.)
Giriraj: Manyata, Jay aap dono theek hai na? (Both nod) (to Rajmata) Humne highway ki footages check karwayi hai Ma Saheb aur woh driver bhi bahut jald mil jayega. (Rajmata nods)
Vj: Mom, Dad kahan hai? Aapne unhe bataya toh hai na? (Menaka nods. Everyone ignore Pratap while Vj tries to call him. Everyone reach Jaigarh Palace for accompanying Manyata. Raj Purohit Ji arrives shortly after return of Pratap Singh.)
Raj Purohit: Khamma Ghani..!! (Everyone welcome him and his assistants. Rajmata informs him about Manyata's pregnancy and the mishap.) Hume lagta hai ki Ma aur Bache ki suraksha ke liye ek yagna karna padega. (Rajmata nods while Giriraj thoughtfully looks at him.)
Brijraj: Toh yagna ke liye muhurat bhi batayiye Raj Purohit Ji. (He nods and calculates the muhurat)
Raj Purohit: Hume 8 din baad yagna kar sakthe hai. Unnati aur Vijayendra Singh ke haldi ke pehle din, Manyata aur Udayveer ke kundali ke mutabik us din ka suryoday (sunrise) ke thik baad yagna karna hone wale bache ke liye uttam hai. Lekin niyam ke anusar hume yeh yagna hone wale bache ki dadihaal (Paternal Grandfather's house) yaani Jaigarh mein aayojan karna hoga aur wahan pe hone wale bache ke Mata-Pita ko ek raat guzarni hogi. (taking a mauli (sacred thread) from his assistant) Dhyaan rahe yeh raksha dhaaga Manyata ke haath se nahi choot sakthi. Yeh dhaaga hone wale bache aur Ma ko har buri nazar se bachayengi.
Udayveer yahan aayiye beta. (Uday comes closer to him) Yeh dhaaga Manyata ke dhaay kalaayi mein bandiye. (Uday ties it.) Manyata beta, aap ko bahut dhyaan rakhna hoga, Jab tak yeh suraksha yagna nahi hoga, aap per sankat aati rahegi. (Everyone becomes tensed.) Lekin chinta ki koi baat nahi hai, Udayveer ke kundali mutabik jab tak yeh dono saath hai, Manyata pe koi aanch nahi aayegi. (Raj Purohit leaves to some temple for an important pooja while elders disperse and indulge in their business. Unjay in usual talking + romance, Jay busy with Jagat on phone.
In Manveer Room, Uday hugs Manyata as soon as she comes out of washroom freshening up.
Manyata: Kya baat hai? Aaj achanak hum per itna pyaar aa raha hai. (catching his hands which are on her waist)
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