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Uday, Unnati and Vj come to dance for Shaam Shandaar.. Manyata is pulled on to stage by Uday; Behir, Manan also joins..:)
Jay: (Takes Mic as music stops..) May I have your attention please.. Manyata Jiji ek challenge karte hai just for fun ki kon music khatam hone tak dance kar pate hai.. Jeet ne wale haarna wale se kuch bhi le sakthe hai.. Of course only for entertainment purpose and nothing serious.. (smiles evilly)
(Uday, Unnati and Vj tries to stop her but Manyata being herself agrees to challenge.. Uday keeps a close look on them while Manyata and Jay dance on 'Nagada Sang Dhol'.. Manyata keeps on dancing gracefully but Jay stops in the middle for catching air. Thus, Manyata wins the challenge.. Everyone claps for her.. Brijraj and Giriraj announce Manyata as winner..)
Unnati: Wow Manyata.. You dance so well.. (Manyata smiles..)
Vj: Yaar Manyata Bhai.. Aap ke dance se hume sweating ho gaya hai.. Oh god.. My Dancing Doll.. (Uday side hugs her by which Manyata's breathe gets hitched for a second..)
(Party ends on a good note and Manveer are exhausted completely.. Unnati, Behir, Manan and Kavya chat with Manveer in living room before retiring to sleep..)
At Jaigarh Palace: Manveer Bedroom (Manveer changed into night clothes and having hot chocolate for relaxing themselves..)
Manyata: (While sipping her hot chocolate..) Waise tumhare friends mujhe bahut ache lage hai.. They are really nice.. (Uday smiles..) Tum ne unse humare baare mein aise kya bola tha ki woh aise tease kar rahe the?
Uday: (Thinks to tease her) What if maine unse humare childhood love story bata di ho toh? (Manyata widens her eyes..)
Manyata: Kya.. Tumhe sharam naam ki cheese pata hai ya nahi.. Humari moments humare personal space hai.. Koi movie ke story nahi jo sab ko suna rahe ho.. (Uday smirks as she mentions 'personal space'..)
Uday: What if maine sirf yeh kaha ki humari roka hua tha Bachpan mein?? (Manyata is shocked..)
Manyata: Kya.. Iska matlab tum ne un se kuch nahi kaha hai.. (Uday nods in yes..) Thank god kitna embarrassing the woh sab.. (Uday is angry as she mentions their memories as embarrassing..)
Uday: (Angrily..) Kya tumhare liye woh sab embarrassing moments the.. Un yaadon ko yaad karte humne 19 saal rahe hai.. Tumhe humare beech jo hua hai woh embarrassing lagte hai. Itna hi bura lagta hoon toh hum se shaadi kyun ki? (Leaves from there..)
Manyata: Uday.. Uday.. ☹☹ (Manyata waits for Uday till late night and sleeps due to exhaustion.. Uday returns at late night and makes her sleep properly and sleep beside her..)
Next morning: At breakfast, (Manyata makes Uday's favourite Spaghetti with lot of efforts.. all are chatting happily except Manveer, Unnati notices but remains silent.. Only youngsters are at table as elders are in the preparation of Muh-Dekhaayi of Manyata..)
Uday: (Refiling Spaghetti..) Spaghetti is really nice guys.. Have it.. (Unnati, Nandini and Bela smile and Manyata feels happy that Uday liked it..)
Unnati: Waise Dada.. I think you must hug the chef and give them a gift.. (Everyone smile..)
Nandini: Haa Yaar UV.. Come on..
Uday: (Asking a maid) Kis ne yeh spaghetti banaya hai?
Maid: Yuvraj sa... Yuvrani sa ne subah utt ke banaya hai.. (Uday keeps quiet.. Nandini and Unnati demand Uday to hug Manyata.. Uday hugs Manyata.. Both feel warmth and peace in the embrace.. They take pics secretly..)
Bela and Navya: Yaar UV.. Apni wife ko hug kar rahe ho ya neighbour ki wife ko hug kar rahe ho.. Kiss kon karega? Come on kiss her man.. Aise behave mat karo ki tum bahut traditional ho.. (Uday kisses Manyata on her forehead and cheeks.. Manyata's ears turn into pinkish shade.. Everyone cheers and take their pics..)
Later At Muh-Dekhaayi
Imagine Manyata in this outfit..
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Uday's Aunt: Beta aap ghunghat pehen ke yahan bait jayiye.. Aur Uday Beta aap yahan bait jayiye.. (A lot of ladies from royal families come and bless the couple, they praise Manyata as Chand ka tukda.. Raj purohit blesses them for babies.. Manveer look at each other.)
(Unnati, Behir, Manan and Kavya plan to go to shopping and movies..)
Later At Shopping mall
(First, they plan to go to ladies section.. Manyata finds difficulty inselecting a dress.. Uday likes a dress which is a black backless gown with white stone work.. Manyata also likes same gown and decides to take it while Uday is in a call.. Everyone pays bills for their dresses and keep them in car.. Unnati and others decide on a romantic movie..)
(Seating Arrangement is: Unnati, Navya, Kabir, Manik, Nandini, Bela, Mahir, Manyata and other is unoccupied. Uday tries to change his seat by giving lame excuses but in vain. He sits there and soon Manyata dozes off being tired and hugs Uday's arm as pillow.)
Uday: (He watches her for some time soon he also sleeps hugging Manyata side wise. Everyone is engrossed in the movie and Manveer sleep peacefully.) (After interval, Uday places his face in the crook of Manyata's neck unintentionally, while sleeping. After the completion of film, everyone looks at them and starts to take photos, giggling.)
Behir: Listen carefully guys... Yeh dono snore kar rahe hai..
Manan: Haye.. Kitne cute lag rahe hai saath mein.. (Navya takes nazar of them while others roll their eyes) (Uday wakes up due to their bickering and giggling.. He silently wakes up Manyata..) (Manyata blushes and her cheeks get a pink hue, observed by Unnati..) (They decide to have lunch at Uday Nivas.)
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Sorry for a SHORT update..!!
Why does Manyata hurt Uday's feelings. Even I didn't like it. Lekin woh kehte hai na jhagda karne se pyaar badta hai..!!
Let's see what fun is ahead in Uday Niwas??
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