This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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Hoping that this update will find you in best of your health..!! :)
Starting with a Sneak peak of last update...
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Manyata wakes up at 4.30 AM and gets ready by 5.30 AM. She searches for sindhur which is on side table of Uday, slowly without making any noise she applies it but accidentally her saree plaits are opened and she falls on Uday. Due to sudden weight, he wakes up and finds Manyata on him with wet hair. Manyata tries to get up but being on wet floor she falls on Uday again and their lips gets brushed. Manyata gets Goosebumps due to shock and she runs away. Uday skips his heartbeat due to the touch and wonders that his princess is making him crazy.
Manyata: (While coming to kitchen) Yeh subah-subah mere saath kya ho gaya hai? Hey Bhagwan bacha lena.
Uday's Aunt: Are bahu.. Aap itne subah utt gaye ho?
Manyata: Ji aaj humari pehle rasoi hai na. Aap jo bologi hum woh sab tayyar kar denge. 😊 (At 8.30 AM everyone including Devgarh royal family except Jay comes for Manyata's Pehle Rasoi.) (Uday's Aunt and Manyata enter the dining hall, Manyata avoids Uday due to embarrassment. Maids get food to the dining table and serve them.) (Uday's Aunt announces that Manyata made Kheer and Carrot Halwa for sweets and for breakfast White sauce Pasta, Chhole Poori, Fruit Salad. For Kul devi prasad, she made Moong dal Halwa.)
Uday: Ji Aunty Komal. (He tastes and feels his mom's cooking after years. But he just tells that it is good.)
Unnati: Dada.. Kya sirf good hai? Aur kuch nahi. (Teasingly)
Uday: (Eyes her to stop) It's really good Manyata.. 😊
Giriraj: Waah beta. Aap ke haath mein toh jaadu hai. Hume toh pata bhi nahi tha ki ghar mein chef hai. Yeh lijiye aap ka shagun. (Diamond necklace.)
Brijraj: Haa Beta.. Khaana bahut tasty hai. Aap ne kab sikha tha? Aur Yeh hai aapka gift. (Diamond Bangles.)
Vj: Haa M bhai. Aap ke saamne toh 5 star hotel ke head chef bhi pheeka pad jayega. Aap ko khaana banana kis ne sikhaya hai.
Manyata: Hum ne kisi se bhi nahi seekha. Hum school ke summer holidays mein khaana banate the. Aur hume khaana banana achcha lagta hai.😊 (To Vj) Jay kahan hai? Hum ne us ke liye yeh salad banaya hai use pasand hai na.
Vj: Uski tabiyat kharaab hai. Us ne aisa kahalwaaya hai. Par Manyata bhai aap ko us ki chinta karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai.
Unnati: Waise Manyata.. Tum ne toh Dada ka favourites banaya hai. Not bad ha. (teasingly)
Manyata: (embarrassed) Carrot halwa banane ka idea Mami sa ka hai.
Unnati: (eating Carrot Halwa) Hum Carrot halwa ka nahi, White sauce pasta ki baat kar rahe hai.
Manyata: Woh.. woh... Humne dad ke liye banaya hai. Dad ko white sauce pasta pasand hai, Right dad?
Giriraj: Of course beta.
Vj: Manyata Bhai!!! Yeh raha aapka gift. Uday Banna!! Aap dono khol ke dekhiye.
Manveer: (Look at each other and open the gift. Manveer Childhood photo. Uday is lifting her and Manyata is laughing. They are looking at each other.)
Imagine this pose with 5 year old girl and 7 year old boy..!!
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Manyata: Bahut achchi photo hai, Vj bhai.
Uday: Yeah Vj Banna. Nice one.
Brijraj and Giriraj: Yeh toh inke roka ka photo hai. Hum evening bait kar woh photos dekh sakte hai. Manyata beta aap ne toh kabhi nahi dekha na.
Unnati: Nice idea dad!! Hum abhi arrangements karte hai.
Vj: Manyata mere bhai!! Yeh toh sirf trailer tha. Ek aur gift bhi hai.
Unnati: Ek aur gift, Vj banna.
Vj: Tada...(Couple rings engraved with their names.) Chaliye rings pehenayiye ek dusre ko.
Imagine their rings to be..!!
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Komal, Menaka: Haa beta, chaliye. (Manveer does accordingly and have an eye lock disturbed by everyone's claps.) (Everyone praises her cooking and she feels happy for that.)
(Uday's Aunt announces for kul devi pooja. Everyone goes to temple. Priest tells Uday to keep sindhur to Manyata. A little of it falls on Manyata's nose by which priest exclaims that their love is eternal. Priest tells to take pradakshina of deity and pour the milk on deity. He blesses them and pooja is done.)
(While coming back to palace, Manyata dozes off since she is tired due to waking up early, cooking and doing pooja. She falls on Uday's arm and hugs it as pillow and sleeps. Uday sees her with love and her hair falls on her cheeks and is getting disturbed, Uday tucks it behind her hair. Manyata smiles in her sleep.)
Uday: (Thinks) Thank you Bhagwan ji. Humare pyaar se humari shaadi ho gayi hai. Ab bas sab kuch pehle jaise hone ka intezaar hai. Hum aapko wada karte hai princess ki aap ko har mushkil se bachayenge. Aap ki zindagi ko khushiyon se bhardenge. Abhi aap ke sir per jo khatra mandraraha hai uske baare mein aap ko na batana hi behatar hai. Aap ke liye humari jaan bhi haasir hai. Hum aap se bepannah pyaar karte hai. I love you Manyata. (Meanwhile, Manyata wakes up due to jerk by speed breaker.She looks at their position and sits suddenly.)
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Sorry for SHORT update..!!
Haaye.. (in Yuvraj Udayveer Singh's style ;) ) It was cute and romantic..!! Isn't it??
Manyata and Uday have almost kissed..!! Oh my godd..! #ManVeer are coming closer, of course in baby speed, but they are progressing..!!
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