This is first time I'm writing a story. Though I have been a silent reader for a long time.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
This is first book in #ManVeer series, however none of th...
Raj Purohit: Ab inki shaadi shuda zindagi ke baare mein kundali mein dekte hai. (Youngsters interestingly listen, after a while) Inke shaadi se Devgarh aur Jaigarh mein sab kuch shub ho jayega. Manyata ki kundali ke mutabik yeh Udayveer ke zindagi bahut khushiyaan laane wali hai aur Udayveer ki kundali ke hisab se Manyata nayi uchayiyon ko chooyenge. Yeh dono ek dusre ke liye hi bane hai. In dono ke kundali ke mutabik yeh dono kisi aur ke nahi ho sakthe. Inke zindagi mein jitne bhi mushkil aayenge yeh dono mil kar sab ka saamna karenge. Yeh dono ek dusre ke adore hisson ko pura karenge. 36 ke 36 gun mile hue hai jo bahut kam jodiyon mein hota hai.
Jay: In short, yeh dono #PerfectCouple hai. Wow!!
Unnati: No.. yeh dono #PowerCouple aur #ForeverInLoveCouple hai.. (Manyata blushes while Uday smirks looking at her reaction. Everyone get happy and function ends on a good note.)
(Wedding preparation start with a bang. ManVeer find difficulty in meeting each other as others make sure they don't meet before marriage. Soon, it is their day of engagement. Manyata wears red yellow lehenga with minimum accessories and make up. Uday wears white red sherwani, looking dashing as always. The ceremony takes place in their farmhouse with limited guests including Mahasabha members and close friends. Unay take mikes.)
Manyata's outfit..!!
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Uday's outfit..!!
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Unay: Good evening everyone. Welcome to #ManveerShaadi2.0 Haha.. (Jay) Confuse mat hoyiye yeh inki dusri baar shaadi hai toh hash tag badal na toh padega na.. (Un) Ab program ke liye start hone ke liye bahut time hai toh kyu na start with a cool performance.
(KoMe perform on Maahi Ve, Others also join them. M, Jay and Vj get emotional as the song ends. They exchange the rings and engagement is done. Manveer share many eye locks. A man in servant's clothes keep an eye on sisters.)
Unjay: (Un) Ab no crying as ab sab ko enjoy karna hai. (Vj) Waise Unnati, Jay bhai kaha hai? Oh hum bhul gaye ab toh Jay bhai ka hi show hai.
(Jay dances on Shubharambh and drags Manyata to dance floor. They both dance while Chandelier gets loose and comes down little. Udjay observe that and drag the sisters out but Jay hurts herself when the Chandelier falls down. Manyata gets unconscious due to stress. Doctor Uncle rushes to treat her while elders investigate about the mishap. The man escapes after spoiling the rope holding chandelier.)
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*Simultaneously at some other place* (Two men are sitting in a hall where one of the man's face is in dark. The other man receive a call regarding Manyata's accident.)
Man: Boss, Yuvrani Manyata aur Rajkumari Jaynandini pe chandelier nahi gira kyun ki Yuvraj Udayveer Singh aur Rajkumar Vijayendra Singh ne un dono ko wakt pe bacha liya. (Boss breaks flower vase in anger.)
Boss: Kuch bhi karo Himesh lekin mujhe wo dono behene mara hua chahiye. (Himesh nods and leaves.) Hum aap dono ko mar kar rahenge. (Looking towards their photos.)
*At Hospital* (Uday is really scared as Manyata can't take stress. Jay's leg is injured badly. Doctor Uncle urges for a scan as Manyata's health worsens. At hospital, Doctor Uncle examines Manyata and suspects about being in coma. He informs the same and is in ICU.)
(KoMe cry, Uday has his head low and tear up. Others look shocked as he cried last on his Mother's Funeral. Manyata's pulse drop and doctors perform cardioversion (The process of giving shocks by electrodes to restore a normal heart beat rhythm when there is abnormality in the heart beats. Medical students and doctors out there...!!! Please don't bash me if it is a case of R.I.P Medical Logic. I'm not from any medical background.)
Everyone start to cry as her health deteriorates. Youngsters cry badly, catching Uday. Rajmata, KoMe cry holding each other.
After a while,
Doctor Uncle: (holding tears) Rajmata Ji.. (all surround him) Hum abhi kuch nahi bata sakthe, At least agle 24 ghante tak toh nahi. Abhi bhi unki condition critical hai. Agar 36 ghante tak unhe agar hosh nahi aaya toh woh coma mein ja sakthi hai. (Everyone gasp.)
(Manyata doesn't gain consciousness even after 30 hours. Everyone is really worried and wait beside her. Uday sits beside her, she lies with numerous machines connected to her body. She gains little conscious. Doctors check her and conclude that she is stable. Everyone sigh in relief. They meet her but she goes unconscious again and is kept under constant observation. After 8 hours, she gains complete conscious. Doctor Uncle examines and allows everyone to meet her. Everyone go in.)
Komal: Manyata, abhi sab theek lag raha hai na, kahi dard toh nahi hai na, How are you beta? (Manyata nods. She tries to sit but everyone deny. She looks around but doesn't find Uday as he stands far. Everyone look at him to come forward, he comes but stands like that.)
Rajmata: Beta, aap ki ser mein dard nahi hai na? (She nods no. Unjay & Jay hug her. Brij-Giri talk for sometime. Everyone leave Manveer for some privacy. He silently looks at her. She tries to catch his finger. He gives some water to drink.)
Manyata: (barely audible) Hume sab kuch yaad aa gaya hai, Uday. (snaps his head) Sach mein. (He hugs her little as not to give any pain for her.)
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Sorry for the shorty-short update..!!
Thank Goodness... Manyata ko sab kuch yaad a gaya..!!
Arey Yaar.. Iss andere mein baitne wale aadmi ki problem kya hai? Why does he wants to kill Manyata and Jaynandini. Kya yeh koi ateet ka raaz hai? (*In Daily Soap style..*)
I really liked the way Manyata tried to catch his finger as soon as everyone left. I could literally imagine her doing that. How Cute na??
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