This is first time I'm writing a story. Though I have been a silent reader for a long time.
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This is first book in #ManVeer series, however none of th...
Let's read the update to find out what happened to Rajmata..!! 😱😲😱😲
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As they reach home, Doctor Uncle have already come and started with the procedure. He is busy examining Rajmata in her room. Manyata, Komal and Menaka are worried.
Doctor Uncle: Unhe woh kada pilaane ka idea kiska tha? (Manyata stands shocked while others are worried.)
Manyata: Doctor Uncle, kya problem hai? Humari kada pilaane ki wajah se kuch.. (nervously)
Doctor Uncle: Nahi beta.. Darasal aap ki kada ne toh jaadu kar diya.. Rajmata ki immunity mein bahut farak hai jaise koi miracle ho gaya ho.. (Manyata is really happy, others breathe a relief.) Woh itna theek hai ki ek hafte mein office bhi join kar sakthi hai.
(Manveer, Unjay Komal & Menaka hug each other. At Dinner, everyone are really happy.)
Komal: Manyata beta!! Aap us kada mein kon se jadi bootiyon ka istamal karte ho? (Everyone look at her interestingly)
Manyata: Ma actually mujhe un jadi bootiyon ko Hindi mein kya kehte hai pata nahi hai. Mujhe sirf Tamil mein unhe kya kehte hai pata hai. (Everyone smile at her.)
Vj: Manyata bhai.. aap ko agar unhe kya kehte hai pata nahi hai toh mangvaya kaise hai?
Manyata: Maine photos dikhaake Seema ji se poude hi mangvaya hai.. Woh Tulasi, Ashwagandha, aise bahut si poude mangvaya hai. (Everyone amuses at her.)
Unnati: Matlab aap ne poude hi mangva diye.. (Manyata nods.)
Komal: Achcha khaane ke baad hum aap ko un jadi bootiyon ka naam batate hai.. (everyone retire to their rooms. Manyata enters smilingly.)
Uday: Don't you think aaj kal tum kuch zyada hi muskura rahi ho?
Manyata: Theek hai, kal se main kamre mein aane se pehle rone lag jaongi.. (rolls her eyes, removing jewellery, Uday looks amused as she rolls her eyes.)
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Uday: (flirtingly) Tum kyun rogi, meri jaan. (She looks shocked as he tells meri jaan. He stands close to her.)
Manyata: U.. Uday hu.. hume so jaana chahiye. Kal subah utna hai. (Next day, Manyata wake up first and positioned as always. She freshens up and Uday is still sleeping.) (thinks) yeh Uday ko kya hua hamesha jaldi utt jaata hai, aaj aise itne der so raha hai? Main ready hoke ise utati hoon.
(She has bath and come out in purple Anarkali with wet hair. She dries her hair with a dry towel while water droplets fall on his face. He wakes up to find Manyata with a cute expression.) (self-talks) Yeh mere baal kabhi bade nahi honge kya? 4 mahine pehle cut kiya hai lekin abhi tak sirf itne hi bade hue hai.. Argh.. Mujhe toh inhe cut hi nahi karvana chahiye tha.. (He keeps on observing her as he finds it cute) are.. is dori ko bhi abhi atak na tha.. (she tries to tie it but suddenly a pair of hands tie it, she looks in mirror.) U.. Uday.. tum utt gaye.. Ah, Good Morning.. (thinks) Mujhe itna ajeeb sa kyu lag raha hai jaise ki pait mein bahut saare titliyon ek saath par maar rahe ho.
(Uday comes out wearing a black vest and track pants and takes his gym bottle. He moves out. Manyata stares him which Uday observes but doesn't say anything.)
(She goes to Unnati's room.)
Manyata: Unnati.. Mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai.
Unnati: Kya hua Bhabhi Sa.. aap subah-subah yahan sab theek toh hai na?
Manyata: Kuch bhi theek nahi hai. Bahut badi problem ho gayi hai. Mujhe toh kuch samajh main nahi a raha hai..
Unnati: Chalo Dada ko batate hai.. aap ki problem aise solve kar denge.. (Manyata looks horrified.)
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What happened to Manyata? Why is she so worried?
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