This is first time I'm writing a story. Though I have been a silent reader for a long time.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
This is first book in #ManVeer series, however none of th...
Well I was free today. So thought of giving an update..!!
I was wondering that after completion of first book, would start updating the second book i.e., 'ManVeer FF - Someone Special'.
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Vj: Waise ek good news hai. (Uday and Manyata look on)
Manyata: Kaisa good news?
Vj: Humare Jay bhai committed ho chuki hai. (Manveer get happy for her.)
Unnati: Lekin maanna padega kya proposal tha so sad aap dono ne miss kiya. (Jay turns pink.)
*Flashback*
As soon as Manveer leave the palace in car. Swarna tends to injured Samar while Jay gets angry as Jagat helps her in bandaging Samar (out of humanity) while Unjay manage the matter with elders. Swarna clings to Jagat, after taking Samar to his room. Jay gets angry tears and leaves from there. Jagat follows her to garden while Swarna follows Jagat.
Jagat: Jaynandini.. aap wahan se kyu aa gayi?
Jay: Kuch nahi. (barely stopping the tears) Aap yahan kyu aaye hai?
Jagat: Aap itni achanak aaye toh hum bhi aap ke peeche aa gaye. (Jay feels very happy.)
Swarna: Jagat.. (they both look at her while Jay feels irritated by her presence.) Aap yahan kya kar rahe hai? Chaliye na.. (To Jay) Excuse me!!
Jay: Aap ko jaana chahiye Jagat.. Swarna aap ki raah dekh rahi hogi. Hum bilkul theek hai. (Jagat leaves and Jay bursts into tears as soon as he leaves.) (thinks) Jagat hume sirf ek achcha dost samajhte hai. I guess yahi humare liye sahi hai. Agar Jagat ko Swarna achchi lagti hai toh hume unhe milaane mein help karna chahiye. (She silently sobs for some time and moves inside.)
(Jagat and Swarna talk with each other while Unjay are busy eye-romancing and spending couple time before their marriage which is in 2 weeks.)
Jay: Hey.. Kya baatein chal rahi hai? Did I miss something?
Jay: Kuch bhi nahi. Bas aise hi. (Jagat buys it while Swarna shrugs it off.)
Swarna: Lets dance na Jagat. (Swarna pulls him to dance floor while Jagat looks uncomfortable. Jay gets tears in her eyes. They dance on 'Uff' from 'Bang-Bang'. Jay leaves from there while Jagat leaves Swarna on the dance floor. Jay runs near swimming pool with eyes, full of tears.)
Jaigarh Palace Swimming Pool.. (*Imagine some pool of this sort..*)
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