This is first time I'm writing a story. Though I have been a silent reader for a long time.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
This is first book in #ManVeer series, however none of th...
Vj: Never ever I mixed chilli powder in someone's coffee. (looking at Manyata, angrily Manyata drinks, other looks shocked.)
Manyata: So hum jab 11th standard mein they ek ladka tha jo mera dost tha. Ek din hum dono school ke bahar khade they aur usne coffee ka plan banaya. Maine socha he's friend so it's okay phir wahan pe usne mujhe propose kiya (Uday doesn't like it.) aur gusse mein maine uski coffee mein mirchi ka powder milakar use pila diya. Iss special coffee pine ke baad usne kabhi mujhse baat karne ki koshish nahi ki. (Everyone look at her shocked.)
Vj: Waise yeh sab tho Manyata bhai ke liye normal baatein hai. Right? (she rolls her eyes..)
Manyata: Kyun Vj Bhai aap ke saath bhi saath koi prank karun waise aaj bhi humare paas bahut saare ideas hai. Just 5 minutes aap ko humare taraf se zindagi ke best surprize milega. What say Jay? (They both hi-fi.)
Vj: (melodramatically) Ho M bhai aap hum per prank karogi, Bhai-Bhai na raha.. I tell you (Manay roll their eyes while Udnati chuckle.)
Unnati: Never ever I have been trapped in an elevator. (Jay drinks.)
Jay: Hum ek hotel mein the aur hum trap ho gaye. Baad mein us staff ki Naukri se nikal diya gaya tha.
Uday: Never ever I have travelled in train. (Manyata, Unnati drink.)
Unnati: Hum London mein ek baar country side jaane ke liye train mein gaye the.
Manyata: Never ever I have cheated in an exam.
Unay: Really? (Everyone drink. They play for some time.)
*Simultaneously at other side* (A man with black jacket enters a mansion and meets two men. One man is sitting in dark while other standing in little light where only his gold chain with pendent of 'H' is to be seen.)
Man with black jacket: Saab!! Dono Rajkumariyan aaj pure parivaar ke saath shopping pe gayi hai. Wahan pe maine Rajkumar Vijayendra Singh aur Yuvraj Udayveer Singh ko dekha hai. Main kuch nahi kar paya. Maaf kijiye Saab!! Next time hum zaroor kuch na kuch karenge. (The man sitting in the dark throws a metal ball on him. Himesh nods his head.)
Man in dark: Nandu tum se toh ek kaam ke nahi hota. Dafa ho jao yahan se. Himesh ab jo bhi hoga hum karenge. Manyata aur Jay humare haathon se marenge. Hume jald hi Mumbai jaana hoga. (Himesh nods and Nandu nods and leaves.)
Later after dinner, Uday enters into their room to find it dark. As soon as he comes Manyata comes in white night gown with many candles on the table.)
Uday: Princess!! Yeh sab kya hai. (She stands near balcony.)
Manyata: Open karo.. (A Blancpain Fifty Fathoms Meteor Automatic watch. He looks surprized while she makes him wear it.)
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