College by DIS0BEYSTYLES
DESCRIPTION:-
Louis Tomlinson (18) really want to go to a college in Ireland. He wants to live there since he has the passions to study in there.
He will have triangle love with two other guys, one is a good guy and one is a bad guy. So who will get chosen by louis? Is it Zayn or is it Harry?
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Rating:- 7/10
My opinion:-
The storylines good. But you need to look at the way it's written. When you start a new person speech - starting a new line etc. Things like this do put people off reading stories because it gets so confusing. Keep writing and just try and slow the pace and look at speech and things. It'll come with time and you just need to believe in yourself and work your way to getting better and trust me with practice it'll come and as you write more you will have an amazing story.
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