Niall's Best Friend by crazy_writer_2013

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Niall's Best Friend by crazy_writer_2013

DESCRIPTION:-

Katie and Niall grew up together and were best friends. Niall leaves and comes back to visit and it's been 5 years. Will things be the same? Or will things change for the better or worse?

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Rating:-8 /10

My opinion:-

I really like this story. My first thing is I think the first bit where she meets Niall again could've been slightly more detailed and have more emotion. After that it goes along really nicely until they start admitting feelings. I think that could've been put in a bit later. It is an amazing story but it is very fast moving so slow it down and it'll be perfect!

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