Review Book 1! (Complete)

How Summer Changed Us by writergirl524

How Summer Changed Us by writergirl524

DESCRIPTION:-

My mom yelled, she knew my dad was dead; there was no way he could have survived that. I grabbed her and held her tight as she cried on my shoulder in disbelief, the same way April's mom did. Julia and Molly held my mom and me, too. Whenever someone else cries I can't handle myself, and I was already crying anyway from my dad dying. At one point I looked over and saw my brothers. They sat on a rusty, wooden and metal bench, looking shocked as they just sat there and watched the burning restaurant that only 10 minutes ago, we had been talking at, sharing laughter at, eating at, and being together at.

Our faces were all black with smoke, but my mom's was worse than anyone else's. Eventually a lot of ambulances showed up. They split us all up. I was paying so much to my mom that I didn't realize I had small, but second degree burns on my arms, and a couple first degree ones on each. They insisted to check them out, but I asked them to let me see my mom first before that.

They told me it was too late.

Talia, Julia, and Molly thought this was going to be the best summer ever. Boy, were they wrong. First, a fire starts in a restaurant all three of them are eating at, the thing is, the fire wasn't started on accident, but on purpose. Many people are killed in that fire. Now, these three have to survive, and get off the island as quick as they can, but when something suspicious is going on back home, where are they even safe?

Incomplete

Rating:- 9/10

My opinion:-

Wonderful story! I haven't seen anything like it so it's really unique. As the story goes on and you find out more things you are more intrigued and curious and want to read more. I think this story will be a success. The only reason I didn't give a ten is it confused me a little and some points it was a bit quick and could be slowed down and have a little more detail.

Otherwise really good and keep going!!