The Recruited by fuzzy_bubblesJ12

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The Recruited by fuzzy_bubblesJ12

DESCRIPTION:

What happens when the nightmare you have been having for years actually happens?

Jenna has no idea what the dreams mean. All she knows is that she is in danger. So when mythical creatures start to seem not so mythical Jenna rebels against all her own rules and helps a kingdom in a war their bound to lose. Not to mention she falls in love. With the wrong guy.

Rating: 8/10

Incomplete

My opinion:

That was quite hard to review as there was only two chapters for me to review. Of what I read it was really good. I think you need to use less authors notes on individual chapters and put them at the start of end of the chapter. As the author notes are short I think that'll be better. Otherwise I really like the story and the idea. Keep.going!

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