Confident | l.h by -coldplay

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Confident |l.h by -coldplay

DESCRIPTION:-

She was confident, she was mean and she always got what she wanted. Everyone sees her as a girl with no feelings but people change and there's much more to her than what everyone thinks.

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Rating:- 9/10

My opinion:-

I've actually looked at your story in a different way to how I normally do and I'm glad I did. Your story perfectly fits the role it should - a romantic short story. However there are some things which could have a bit more detail in. However keep going it is doing really well.

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