Ever Summer by TheQueen_A
DESCRIPTION:
(Previously, Operation: Bring back Summer"
"You'll never know the real value of the moment until it was just a memory".
Once in the limelight, Zayn Malik had it all.
Fame, Fortune and Love.
Fame, the most in-demand celebrity in the center of the spotlight.
Fortune, expensive cars, grand address, wealth and
Love, he had the girl that he loves so much and loves him more, his number one fan, his only true love, Sunny Summers.
But everything changed when the luxuries of life had eaten him alive.
Zayn found himself in a new environment that offered him great pleasure he had never felt before. Blinded by the thrill,excitement of being on top of his career, Zayn took this world's offer, but in exchange..
He dumped everything and everyone and that had been behind him even before entering Showbusiness.
Everyone, even Sunny.
Now, after two years.
The crowd's eye has a new apple, and Zayn is no longer in the scene.
In just a snap, everything he had is gone.
And in this lowest part of his life he knows what he really wanted,
Not Fame, nor Fortune... But his Love, Sunny Summers.
His Still, Always and Ever Summer.
P.S. A story of second chances, love, friendship and undeniable hotness plus unbelievable cuteness
Incomplete
Rating: 8/10
My opinion:
The Way you start the prologue is amazing! It's a great way to start a story. I think the bold lines and the normal ones shouldn't be mixed in the way you have as it confuses you. I flick from bold to bold and miss lines. It's really good and I like the plotline however the grammar puts me off a little. That's where you lost the points. Maybe edit it or get an editor? Really good otherwise! Keep going.
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