Hidden Intent by Gorillo1
DESCRIPTION:-
Was only a normal middle school student when he started his own business an extermination business following in the steps of his father until the day came after finishing a job his whole world turned upside down as he now fights to save his own life a prize even the best of assassins would take
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Rating:- 9/10
My opinion:-
Your story has been written really well and has a good flow. The chapters are a little short but they do get longer and better as the story moves on! Keep writing stories, you are a good writer. One slight thing though - I didn't understand your description properly. Keep writing!!
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