Queen of Football by idonutcare_

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Queen of Football by idonutcare_

DESCRIPTION:

Who said football was a guys sport?

Amber King is your typical High School Senior; gorgeous, smart and the captain of the football team.

Incomplete

Rating: /10

my opinion:

Ok so your first statement/ authors note sounds full attitude and will put a reader off quite quickly as they won't want to read something by someone who sounds rude. Besides that though it's a good story. I can't give it a rating as there wasn't enough but it sounds good. I don't get what's going to happen and I'm really sorry but I didn't see a plotline to it. It's good but I think you need to create suspense in the description to get more readers.

Sorry! And keep the story going!

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