Close Your Eyes by MatamelcanHunter
DESCRIPTION:-
Opal is a protector. She'd rather herself be hurt than others to be. She believes that the safety of others is more important than any one life, even her own. Blizz is a fighter. His heart lies with himself rather than the general he serves and the ones he guards. The Great Serpent, Gerathon, has been infecting the dreams of the both of them, along with their friends. Blizz, with dreams. Opal, with nightmares.
So don't close your eyes...
Or face the snake.
Incomplete
Rating:- 8/10
My opinion:-
It's good! Interesting and makes sense, flowing well. Now to improve, you need to look a bit more at the layout and paragraghing a bit more as it looks a bit unorganized but the story does work and I understand its hard. Your writing and organisation does improve as the story goes on! I think when you finish just go back over and do some editing and it'll be perfect!
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