Into the Edge

The fire blazers

"Why? Who are the Fire Blazers? I doubt they're as good as you said before." I ask.

"Their horrible creatures really, huge red boots with gold swirly designs, red pants, red shirt, and their covered in this huge red armour, most carry axes, some carry swords, and some, but not many, carry bow and arrows." Ellie says.

"And Nick, he's behind it all, and Rose to, the drop you down this shoot for the Fire Blazers to collect, and they give you these injections, that makes you pass out, and it gives you these terrifying dreams, you feel the emotions and the pain, like watching your friends die and you can do nothing about it, feeling the pain of getting yourself ripped in half. It's horrible. And after if you're not already mentally dead, then they kill you. And incase you were wondering mentally dead means that you aren't in control of your own body and that your easily manipulated, there for, Nick turns you into a Fire Blazer." Jerry explains.

"How?" I ask.

"By merely telling you that you are one, that you kill on sight, that you don't have any emotions, that your one of them, you'll believe it, because as I said before, when your mentally dead, your easily manipulated." Jerry says.

"And there for, can be controlled." Lauren says.

"Correct." Ellie says.

"But, why did you have those green bugs on your necks?" James asks.

"Because, it's the Fire Blazers way of injection, beetle bite, those beetles, that were on our necks, they were genetically engineered to give doses of, what I like to call, terror serum." Ellie says.

"So, how are you two not mentally dead?" I say.

"We are, but just half way." Jerry says.

"Yeah, but it'll where off eventually, so don't tell us to do anything crazy okay, because we might actually do it." Ellie says.

"Oh cool! So, how did you get out?" Lauren asks.

"One of the Fire Blazers, isn't really a Fire Blazer, he helped us get out, helped us escape, he's faking it, faking that he's a Fire Blazer, he is one of the rare few that can resist the terror serum. His name is Max." Lauren says.

"He was one of us, until Nick almost killed him, so he was dropped into the cave of fire.
What's the cave of fire?" James asks.

"It's where the Fire Blazers live." Ellie answers.

"Isn't it obvious." Lauren says.

"No." James answers.

"Maybe for you." I say.

"So, how can we escape? How can Mex help us? How can we get of here? Out of the edge?" James says.

"I'd have to talk to Max, he knows everything, we only know about the Fire Blazers. He knows so much more." Ellie says.

"I'm sure there's a way." Lauren says. Ellie and Jerry have to think a minute.

"I don't think there is any chance of contacting him while we are here, we'll have to go into the cave of fire and find him." Ellie says.

"Let's go." Liam and James say.

"No, tomorrow morning." I say.

"Nicks guards would see us. Let's wait." I say. "Anyways it's, wow, it's, it's 9:59! We have to go! Nicks guards will be out soon, Ellie and Jerry, you hide in the tree, and we'll go to bed, we can escape in the morning, at 6:30, okay?" I ask.

"Okay!" everyone says as Ellie and Jerry hide in the tree and me, Lauren, Liam and James walk over to our cabin and sit in our bunks. But just as I start drifting off into sleep, I hear the speakers turn on, it's Nick's voice.

"As you all know it's curfew. So you should be in bed by now! And I have a very important message for all of you trouble makers out there, security will be doubled, and anyone who gets in trouble from now on, will be killed!" Nick says.

More like get turned into a Fire Blazer!

The picture is of what a fire blazer looks like. In case you guys were wondering, I'm making a new book but I don't know what it should be about, so can you guys give me some ideas, and any idea, wether I think it's good or bad, the person who had the idea has guaranteed a spot in the book!