1] Book Title : A LURING DARKNESS
Username : iworshipbangtan
Category : OT7
1) Cover = 4.5 /5
The face claim is a plus point when designing a fan-fic cover, but yours was exceptional. It was so good.
2) Title = 5 /5
Perfect
3) First Impression = 10/10
4) Grammar and punctuation = 14/15
If you're wondering why you lost 1 point, it's because this book is so good that I judged it strictly. It was so hard to find an error, but I found a few punctuation errors here and there.
5) Plot = 14/15
The plot idea isn't completely unique, so it gets a -1. I have seen horror stuff here on Wattpad before, but I must say you rock it.
6) Vocabulary = 10/10
It was full of creative words.
7) Descriptive writing = 10/10
well done.
8) Description = 5/5
You made me so excited.
9) Character Development = 10/10
Well-built.
10) Emotions = 15/15
TOTAL MARKS : 97.5/100
Your book is amazing. I love it. I'm glad to judge your book.
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2] Book Title: The Debut Album
Username:Kookiebuns1997
Category: OT7
1) Cover = 4/5
I think it fits your story but try to be more creative.
2) Title = 4/5
suits well, but not a unique chilling name.
3) First Impression =8 /10
Not bad. You chose good points.
4) Grammar and punctuation =11 /15
I saw some important punctuation mark errors there. The grammar is almost ok.
5) Plot =14 /15
I love it.
6) Vocabulary = 7/10
simple language but it's not bad.
7) Descriptive writing = 9/10
Good, but try to describe more surroundings.
8) Description = 3/5
Darling, you need to make it a bit more attractive. You have used sparkles but the length is not okay. Try to add more words.
9) Character Development = 9/10
I could say I loved the way you built it. Especially both Jungkook's.
10) Emotions = 15/15
I really felt each and every moment. I think every ARMY can feel the story. Some scenes were like bullets that bombed into the core of my heart.
TOTAL MARKS:84/ 100
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3] our ghost fangirl.
Author - kim_cherry_madhatter
Cover -5 : 3/5 the cover could be given more attention as it's one of the important things.
Title -5 : 5/5 The title choice is right
First impression -10 : 7/10 The cover was one of the reasons I didnt feel much attract, but the title and the description got me going.
Grammar and punctuation -15 : 13/15 just a bit of mistakes, it could be okay after you edit some parts :)
Plot -15 : 12/15 the plots very nice and different.
Vocabulary -10 : 8/10 english is not everyone's first language and there are a few places I'd want you to check out your vocabulary.
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