1] Book title:: Regret PJM
author:: CutieGhost0746
category:: Oneshots/short stories
cover : 5/5 : it matches the story theme and gives hint that its going to be sad, and editing is done perfectly as well
title : 5/5 : matches story
first impression : 8/10 : the intro wasn't done well and wasn't really interesting, it seemed like a cliche plot
grammar and punctuation: 10/15 : punctuation was wrong at times, overuse of full stops, missing commas in many sentences. and grammar was very basic, there weren't adjectives to describe speeches and some sentences were incomplete
plot : 7/15 : im sorry but it was very cliche, i guessed the entire story from halfway in, but some scenes were interesting
vocab : 7/10 : basic and simple vocabulary, but used correctly
descriptive writing : 4/10 : there wasn't much of the descriptive writing, and if there was, it wasn't detailed
description : 5/5 : short, gave hints to the book and interesting
character : 4.5/10 : there wasn't much information on the characters, no features were described, not much background story either
emotions : 10/15 : anger, sadness and lust was included, but the sadness wasn't described very well
total : 65.5/100
💮
2] story title :: Bts Oneshot
author username :: kim_cherry_madhatter
category : Oneshots/short stories
cover : 5/5 : appealing and eye catching, editing isn't shabby
title : 1/5 : very simple, not very attracting but gives info on the story
first impression : 7/10 : it wasn't very attracting but it seemed interesting to read
grammar and punc : 12/15 : perfect grammar, and punctuation was good as well, but it was missing at some places, and excessive full stops and less commas
plot : 15/15 : creative and interesting plots
vocab : 8.5/10 : good vocabulary, but it was misused at some places, avoid using korean words such as 'omo'
descriptive writing : 10/10 : descriptive writing was visible and written very well, descriptive imagery was perfect as well
description : 2.5/5 : short, related to the book but try making it eye catchy
character : 9.5/10 : there was good information and character description! try adding a bit more of light background information, rest is perfect
emotions : 12/15 : since lust was mostly included and it was conveyed very nicely, ill give you 12.5 but try including more emotions
total : 82.5/100
💮
3] Book title :: After life MYG
author username ::Mochi_archer
category : Oneshots/shot stories
cover : 4.5/5 : edited well, gives the correct aura, the filter was not needed but its good anyway
title : 5/5 : interesting, catches attention
first impression : 10/10 : seemed very fun to read, the first few lines had me hooked to the book
grammar and punc : 13.5/15 : use more punctuation! add more commas where they can be used, grammar is perfect!
YOU ARE READING
SMERALDO AWARDS 2021 || CLOSED
Fanfiction"Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart" - William Wordsworth. Open(X) Judging(X) Closed(⭐)
