I'm thinking about rewriting this story. It wouldn't totally be different from the original plot but it would have some changes along with the chapters being longer.
What do you think? Any suggestions are also welcome. Please comment your thoughts on this.
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Raptors of Isla Sorna
AdventurePolar is a lone velociraptor looking for a good pack to live in. But most packs have way too many rules for her liking, so a whole ton of packs are out. Polar is shockingly not interested in finding a mate at the moment, so will a male ever catch he...