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Synne Blackburn gains dangerous pyrokinesis flame powers after a traumatic event, and rather than using it for good, she uses it to take her revenge on the person who she finds to be responsible: Spider-Man.
After a spell is cast, S...
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chapter three•defeated
"I am so confused right now," Peter says, quickly glaring at me and Otto.
Otto's tentacles look like they are malfunctioning.
What had Parker done to them? When Doc Ock's tentacles plunged into Parker's suit, that must have given Peter full control of Otto's machine. This 'version' of Peter seems to be very intelligent. I am also very confused, just like Parker and Otto are.
I'sure where you were, or who you were with. Was this even Peter Parker?
"What's happening?" Otto demanded.
"New device detected," a robotic voice spoke.
Who is this boy?
He looks very different from my Peter. My Peter had dark brown hair that was fluffier, but it stuck up higher. My Peter had a longer neck and a completely different face. His suit was red and blue and most of the details of it were different, along with the material and design.
My Peter was slightly taller. The Peter in front of me has a younger looking face. He has more of a sweet and innocent look to him. He is very cute, I have to admit. Maybe a bit cuter than my Peter.
It sucks that Parker ruined my life, or maybe in another life the two of us would be close. I had gotten along with my Peter before the fire happened and I found out he was Spider-Man.
Peter currently has an iron suit with advanced technology and commands. It is interesting, and it defintely topped the other Peter's suits. I am intrested in the spider arms that Peter attacked Otto with.
A hologram of Otto and his tentacles appeared on Peter's control panel. After Parker presses a few buttons, I hear the robotic voice again. Peter seems to have some more tricks up his sleeve, and my prediction seems to be right.
"Pairing new device."
Peter's Iron Spider Suit is now connected to Otto's tentacles, making it in control of Doc Ock's machine. This Peter truly is smart like mine, maybe even smarter. I like to see heroes using their brain.
"You don't listen to him, you listen to me!" Otto cried, as Parker started to take control.
Peter tested the connection, and the tentacles surely followed his every move. He laughs in relief. "Hey," Peter giggled.
Why am I smiling? Peter giggling and playing around with the two of me is somewhat adorable.
Parker then waves at Otto and I, and the tentacle claw waves back. Peter then shot one of Otto's tentacles toward the dangling car, and the woman screamed in shock and in panic, not realizing that Peter was helping her at first.
Why is Peter concerned about helping every last innocent? Not everyone deserves that. The people that let everyone I loved die, including Spider-Man, don't deserve to live free.
Otto tried to swing at Peter with his fist, but his attempt wasn't even close. Peter laughed at him, gently rotating the tentacles.
"Hey! Hey! Listen to me! No, not him, me!" Otto yelled in frustration.
"Parker's really defeated you, hasn't he?" I laugh.
Some part of me calmed down just watching Peter. Doc Ock trying to break free was one thing that made me finally laugh.
"You think you're off the hook, fire girl?" Peter questioned.
I roll my eyes, as Peter grabs the car with the woman inside it, and then grabs me with one of the tentacles, placing the three of us and the woman back on the bridge.
I struggle against the claw's grip, yelling at Peter the whole way up to the top of the bridge.
Peter then had a conversation with the lady he saved, who complained to Otto and I. As I was about to give a rude remark back, Peter stopped me. Doc Ock attempted to hit Peter once again, and failed just like the last time.
I then tried to shoot fire at him, but Peter stopped me by shooting webs at me, trapping my hands and any shot you had at hand-to-hand combat or using your powers whatsoever.
"Let me out," I order.
"I don't think I will."
He controlled the tentacles to move me closer to him, which caught you very off guard. I stare into his brown eyes, being forced to look in his direction.
Maybe this Peter is different. He seems different.
As Otto and Peter bickered, I notice that something is off.
