Archive from the ADFB book cuz I will unlist that chapter later:
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Ok now for my personal and wayyy less professional ramblings!!
I DID IT!!!! I DITD!! I REWRTOER!!! KILL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It took an entire month, it was way longer than expected but I have finally revised every chapter. I guess I expected less because last time I went thru my entire book to correct grammar and stuff it took me... two days apparently. Don't take it from me, take it from the past me.
Well shit, I don't have the time to do that nowadays! I'm almost 18 and I say that with the utmost of dread! FUCK!!
Well apparently past me didn't do a really good job, ok so basically screw grammar.ly it sucks I just changed the browser's language from spanish to english and boom suddenly I have red squiggly lines that aren't obnoxious, with this powerful took I fixed all grammar mistakes, my top three mistakes were "Immediatly" "Suddendly" and "Aswell"
And yes I was wayy more through this time around and also had like 3 more long ass chapters so I guess that makes up for the month it took.
I came up with an analogy for this whole experience... Imagine it all as if it were a big building, each chapter being a floor, so I build the first two floors and then I'm all like "Well shit I guess it's good for now!" so I open up the building and people start moving in. So as time passes I start building more and more floors each time nicer and nicer, problem is that I build these floors on top of these old ones so by the time i'm at floor 19 the first few floors are like 100 years old and falling apart so I have to focus my resources on patching said floors although I can't really fully rebuild them because well shit people are living in this building there's only so much I can do!! And it really doesn't help that I build a few floors and then take my sweet ass time to build the next few floors and
...I think I should settle down, readers, as a thanks for all of you that chose to read the book where I talk to the void, I shall reward you with the greatest of goodies, and I've never done this before: A SNEAK PEEK!!
Here's a bunch of lines from EP. 19 taken completely out of context!!
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(the one above this line is totally clickbait I feel kinda bad posting it without context but fuck you loololol)
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