lo'ak x oc
hi guys!
this is my first ever book but ive just been reading so many fan fics about avater and i really wanted to make my own, it just seems so fun.i have really bad grammar so please dont judge and just let me know what i can fix and how.
i wont follow the script of avatar the way of water too much cause i cant be bothered to write all that but there will be a few changes. spider wont exist. this isnt because i dont like him but hes kind of irrelevant.
i am still currently editing the book and fixing my spelling and grammar. it would be much appreciated if you comment where i need to fix and give suggestions on how to fix it.
all the kids are aged up except tuk.
neteyam - 18
kiri - 18
tuk - 7
aonung - 18
tsireya - 17
rotxo - 18disclaimers
i just want to let you know i won't be writing smut, so if that's what you're into i don't suggest this book. the reason for this is simply because i cannot write smut to save my life 😭. although i have read smut i don't know jack shit about smut yk. there will be fluff thoughalso i am Australian so i will use Australian spelling, there will be mentions of death and violence.
i understand that the oc's that i have picked are ugly or don't look like real na'vi so feel free to imagine them how you like!
if you don't like the book i understand but please tell me why because im always looking for ways to improve my books ❤️
𝐜𝐚𝐬𝐭
𝐧𝐚'𝐭𝐞𝐲𝐚 - 17 (𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠 18)
"𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐚 𝐛𝐫𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐡𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐲𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐬 𝐩𝐨𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐛𝐥𝐞"
𝐥𝐨'𝐚𝐤 - 17 (𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠 18)
"𝐢 𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐬 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐲𝐨𝐮"
𝐭𝐲'𝐰𝐫𝐞𝐧 - 19
"𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐟𝐮𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐞 𝐧𝐞𝐞𝐝𝐬 𝐲𝐨𝐮, 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐩𝐚𝐬𝐭 𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬𝐧'𝐭"
enjoy the book!
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Romancena'teya, daughter of respected family in the kekunan clan, fled with her older brother ty'wren after her parents' deaths in war. ⛤ started - 03/06/23 finished - 09/01/24