Dear reader!
We have made it to the end of "Don't Forget..." and honestly, it's been a bittersweet journey.
I hope that you loved Rosemary and Will, and mourned the deaths of Charlotte Reidall and Rosemary Miller.
I had high hopes for this story, and I think I did a pretty okay job writing it. If you have any constructive feedback, that would honestly be appreciated!
If you want to leave a review, or what you thought about this book, please do because I would enjoy reading them!
Now.
Even though this book is done, I'm still a writer, so I'm gonna be a bit cruel here.
I will show you all the parts where it hinted at Rosemary's death as well as other sad things that happened in this book! (Also stuff like irony, you know?)
Yes, I'm cruel.
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"Wouldn't you like your life to end on a happy note, Will?"
-Rosemary, Chapter 3
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"Do you think you'll get a happily ever after?"
"I really hope so, Will. I really, really do."
-Will & Rosemary, Chapter 3
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"He knew she had suffered. He had watched the pain."
-Mystery Italics Man (a.k.a. Will Miller), Chapter 8
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"These blank spots you get, this amnesia...that's not normal."
-James, Chapter 10
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"Why did your life end like this?" he asked into the silence. "Why did it all have to end like this?"
-Mystery Italics Man (a.k.a Will Miller), Chapter 11
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Her friend smiled. "It's you and me," she said. "We're a team now. And we're gonna stick together, yeah?"
"Till the end," she agreed.
"Till the end," Charlotte repeated.
-Charlotte & Rosemary, Chapter 12
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"Even when he stopped talking to her.
Even when he kept giving her the cold shoulder."
-Mystery Italics Man (a.k.a Will Miller), Chapter 18
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"I'm sorry," he whispered. "How many times did you try and talk to me? How many times did I ignore you?"
-Mystery Italics Man (a.k.a Will Miller), Chapter 25
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"You wouldn't have listened. You never did. You turned your back. You walked away to your friend*."
-Mystery Italics Man (a.k.a Will Miller), Chapter 29
*friend being Jackson Crowle :)
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"You tried to tell me, didn't you?" he whispered. "All those times I ignored you, all those times our eyes met, you were trying to tell me."
-Mystery Italics Man (a.k.a Will Miller), Chapter 31
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"I knew one day I would have to let you go. I knew it. I'm glad, though, that I got to know you more than I did. Even if we had our disagreements."
-Mystery Italics Man (a.k.a Will Miller), Chapter 35
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"And here he was again, mourning the fact that his sweet big sister he had once known was gone from his world."
-Will, Chapter 36
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"Don't let Jackson hurt her.
His wish came true."
-Will, Chapter 37
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That's all that I could find (yes, I read my entire book right now). But, like...guys...
A pink rose and Rosemary!!
ROSE.
GUYS^^ T-T
I also have some questions for you, please answer!
1. What did you like the most about this story? What was your favorite scene?
2. Which scene did you hate the most?
3. Where you shocked to know Mystery Italics Man's identity?
4. Are you really angry with me right now?
5. If you really liked my story, maybe you can promote it to other people? :D
Alsooooooo.
If one of you by any chance has the username of Fanficthor, I have a message for you!
PLEASEDONTBEANGRYWITHMEIMSORRRYYYYYY AREWESTILLFRIENDS?
#EDIT:
I also wanted to point out something: THE ITALIC POV WAS CHRONOLOGICALLY GOING BACKWARDS. In the beginning of the normal story, it was 3 years AFTER Rosemary's death, and at the end of the book, it was Rosemary's funeral. I thought it would be cool to make those two timelines meet at the end :)
Bye, everyone...this is the end of "Don't Forget..." and I hope you enjoyed :,)
Thank you for reading!
Love you all!
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