hey guys i know there is not much of you reading my book and am grateful for those who are i am going to be going through changing and editing things as when i started this book i just started writing with no plan or anything and re reading there are lots of things that could be developed and improved
BY NO MEANS AM I CHANGING THE STORY
i am just improving my characters a bit more and editing a few scenes just on whole to make the book better
so if you get any new notifications from a already published chapter i am just editing it
that being said you do not have to re read the entire book just know that the characters personality s might change a tad bit just so this story is more on the realistic side
for example carmella will not instantly warm up to her brothers straight away as it is a bit unrealistic after 3 years of abuse as personally when i read the cliche long lost sibling books i feel they get attached to their family too quick after knowing them for like a week of two
but anyway 95 percent of this book will be the exact same
so when you come back i hope you will love this book even more
i will most likley pre write loads of chapters and schedule them after i finish editing as i am aware i sort of left on a cliffhanger
all feedback is welcome byyy
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Lost love
Teen FictionCarmella living in London with her abusive step dad thinking life could not get any worse after her mum died the only person she thought every truly loved her that is until she founds out she has 6 older brothers willing to take her all the way to...
