Abyss- BrokenElegance
BrokenElegance
Title 4/5
It is interesting and is not common and memorable too. It does match the context.
Blurb 4/ 5
Yes it attracts to read further and is not vague. It fit nicely to the theme
Cover 5/5
The cover is attractive and fonts suit correctly
First Chapter 4/5
The beginning is cliche but execution of words. It is intriguing to read further
Grammar and Vocabulary 14/15
The story uses good range of words according to the theme of the same. It have very less issues
Pace 10 /10
The pacing is good and had good modulation throughout the book but didn't have space for getting bored.
Plot 15/15
It is kind of cliche but was interesting and added so much more unique ideas and associated emotions in it giving it a realistic feel.
Writing Style 10/ 10
The style is good and I personally had a good quality time reading. Hope you keep the style with moderation with time.
Emotions 10 /10
I felt the emotion as they went from phase to phase throughout the book . It did it best on doing so.
Character development 9.5 /10
The characters had their development well there is some that needs a little to others . But transformation is smooth.
Overall enjoyment 10/10
I enjoyed the the story so much and had great time too
Total 95 / 100
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