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જ Crippled inside જ ☾Priyu☽

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Book name: Crippled inside.
Author: Elephant_Reject
Reviewer: fairyxsilver

Title:- 9/10

The title was good and appropriate and was too unique

Cover:- 10 /15

The cover was not appropriate. It needs to be changed and I would suggest author to go for graphic shops and get their cover done

Content:- 36/40 ( grammar and punctuation, content creativity , plot , originality )

Plot was good but the things have been rushed up while writing. It looks like previous statement and scene was left incomplete when author decided to hum to another scene. There were grammatical errors also so I would suggest author to edit her chapters and take time while completing one scene.

Writing skills:- 20/20

She is a good writer and has good plots in her minds. She can do wonders.

Overall enjoyment :-14/15

I enjoyed reading the story. Author just needs to do proof reading and then edit the chapter as per required .

Total marks :- 89/100

Have a good day ❤️