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Title: 5/5
The title matched perfectly with the plot of the story.
Blurb: 5/5
The blurb did not give away too much information about the story or too little. It gave the readers the perfect amount of information where we were able to understand the plot.
Plot/flow: 14/20
The plot remained consistent throughout the entire story where the author was not adding unneeded information, as a reader I was able to follow along perfectly. As for the flow it moved very fast where it was kind of hard to follow at points. Furthermore, in the last chapter it was hard to follow due to the story jumping around.
Character development: 3/5
There was great development with the male main character. However, it feels like there wasn't much of a development with the female main character.
Grammar/punctuation: 8/10
There were no punctuation errors besides a few punctuation that could be swapped out with another form like there were a few exclamation marks that could have been periods. As for grammar there were only a few misspelled words.
Readers enjoyment: 6/10
I really enjoyed the story and it was something new to me that I never read before. However, it did move too fast for me.
Total: 42/55.
Review: Overall the story was really really good and I enjoyed it. I love how the author gave translations for the readers who wouldn't understand what the words mean. I also enjoyed the world building that the author included, however there was a lack of character building. By including this it would help slow down the story while making sure it remained a short story.
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