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Title: Mismatched Souls

Author: justlikethatyougotme

Reviewer: Caitrw

Title: 5/5
This title is great for this book, it really captures the dynamic in a way of Avira and Madav's beings.

Blurb: 2/5
The blurb contains great excerpts but that's all. There needs to be some kind of description there that way the readers know what exactly the book is about as well as the plot.

Plot/flow: 15/20
The flow of the story is absolutely perfect, the pace it is moving makes it enjoyable and doesn't rush anything. When it comes to the plot I was able to use my context clues in what it was but I was unsure in the beginning due to me not having the blurb.

Character development: 5/5
There was great development with the characters within the chapters where you can see the character's personality coming out as well as how they are opening up in a way with the readers. I also really like the development of A and M's relationship because the author is writing it in a way where it's developing naturally and slowly.

Grammar/punctuation: 8/10
The author did a great job, there were no errors punctuation wise and when it comes to grammar I only caught a couple errors like in chapter 10 you said drunk when it should have been drank with the wording of the sentence.

Readers enjoyment: 10/10
I absolutely love this book so far, the author made it really enjoyable where it also captivates you. The author also hit a sweet spot of mine with not only a slow burn but also an enemy to lovers.

Total: 45/55

Review:
Overall this is a really great book. This book gave me Fourth Wing vibes and I was loving it. The author did a great job at world building and descriptions over all that as a reader it applied to my senses that way I was able to imagine it perfectly. The author also is doing a great job with Avira and Madhav's relationship and making it not move too fast. Furthermore, the graphics included were beautiful as well with how smoothly the transitions were from paragraph to paragraph and even chapter to chapter.