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Title: 5/5 The title of the book fits perfectly with the events that were happening throughout the book.
Blurb: 3/5 The blurb really applies to the reader's senses visually and provides a good amount of info however, it is too long where the beginning part is not really needed.
Plot/flow of the story: 8/20 Although the plot was sort of there it was really hard to understand it due to the lack of details. This leads to a lot of unknowns and missing information in the story. The flow moved were too fast it was hard to follow along.
Character development: 2/5 There was a lack of character development, the character development that was there was formed excellently.
Grammar/punctuation: 8/10 Overall the grammar and punctuation were spot on and the sentences were well formed. There were a couple of areas where periods were missing and there were an area or two that had extra space.
Reader enjoyment: 6/10 I enjoyed the story however, it was really hard to get into it with the lack of details and how fast it moved.
Review: Overall it was a good short story that holds a lot of potential. The author did great at the world-building where I could visualize what they were talking about. I was confused by the random bold words that would pop up as well as the time skipping that made it confusing to read due to it being hard to follow along. The author has a great concept going that with added details would make the story even better due to how it would build the plot.
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