This part is for those lovely humans/aliens/timelords or ladies who bears with me this far, and most likely doesn't want to go back re-reading the chapters I edited. So I make this part so that you don't need to do that :)
The things I changed was :
1) It seems that Lauren likes Dane and goes fangirling over him, but then hates him because he breaks her heart, by choosing another girl. (Cliche? Yeah I thought so too.) I changed the main problem to why she hated Dane is because something embarrassing happened to her when she was a kid, and Dane's reaction were... not the kindest one.
That is the only changes I made. I hope that this somewhat will makes the story more interesting...(because my past self is very cliche and unplanned :/)
Thanks for bearing with me so far, I couldn't thank you enough :]
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Dusting Off A Heart
Любовные романыLauren Snow refused to believe in love. The past heartbreak and loneliness does not help it either. Plus the surrounding around her that state even more that there's no point in believing in it. She thinks that love is temporary and selfish. Afrai...
