a follow up

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Hello it is me :D this story has been getting a lot of attention recently and I couldn't be happier! I love seeing people vote for every chapter in my notifications, it just makes me feel good inside. Anyway, this chapter will be updated every so often with little tidbits about the making of this story just to give you more insight on the reality of writing.

1. The language used for the spells actually has reason. I put English phrases relating to the spell into Google Translate and turned it into (broken) Swedish. Then I went through and changed letters in the words so it wasn't a real language. 

2. The following is the original, rough outline of the story. When I say rough, I mean really rough.
-Dan 9 Dan meet Marlhy
-Dan 13 Dan love PJ
-PJ bad o no
-Dan v sad
-Dan meet Phil he lost (Dan 15 nao)
-Dan take Phil to fort bc nice
-Dan no trust Phil
-Dan say Phil stay at fort pls
-Dan sleep
-Dan talk to Marlhy bc no trust Phil
-Marlhy say "he good m9"
-Phil like Dan bc cute
-Phil sad bc Dan no trust
-Fite
-Dan & Phil sooper sad
-Dan set up pretty place for Phil
-Phil v happy
-Phil say he love Dan
-Dan say he love Phil
-Do the kiss
-Sleep in fort together but not liek dat u feel
-Dan ask Phil to be bf
-Phil liek ya
-Dan bring Phil home 
-Mum like no gay Dan
-Fite
-Dan grounded 4eve
-Dan mum gon make Dan move
-Dan liek nah & run away
-Phil v sad in woods
-Marlhy try to mak Phil v hap
-No work
-Dan show up
-Phil v hap
-Dan & Phil mak hous of drift wood in pretty place
-Dan & Phil hap
-Dan get sik bc human
-Phil liek o no
-Marlhy liek "fairy no get sik mak him fairy"
-Phil mak potion
-Dan fairy yay
-Phil not o no
-Phil drink potion
-Phil fairy too
-Dan & Phil hap agin

(Yes, that is exactly how it was written.)

3. Marlhy's name comes from Marlhy Murphy. Ilhsm so I had to use her name. :P

4. Ava originally wasn't in the story. I mostly added her because I wanted a cute sideplot relationship but I didn't want to be cliche and pair Marlhy up with Chris. Ava is based on Dottie James because I'm in love with her tbq

I've got to go, will update this soon ^_^




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