Dawnstripe's POV
Me and Hareflight picked up Shrewpaw's battered and bloodied body and dragged him to camp. On the way he whimpered some and everytime I set him down and licked him to stop whimpering he would paw at me like he was defending himself. We made it to camp and I went on ahead and ran to Hawkheart and Barkpaw. "Get as many healing herbs as you can. Shrewpaw is severly hurt." I ran back to Shrewpaw in the middle and thrust through the crowd slowly surrounding him. What happened? Some asked. Others asked If he was going to die and I said just to move so that Hawkheart and Barkpaw could treat him. "Hawkheart and Barkpaw. Stay with Hareflight while I go and find Tallpaw."
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Tallstar's revenge: Chapter 22: a rewrite from my head
FantasyThis is about what I thought could have happened in Chapter 22 in Tallstar's revenge.