Dawnstripe's POV
I sat for a bit, pondering over Tallpaw and his condition. I wondered if he would ever be a warrior. "Tallpaw, if you hear this then please don't die or not be able to be a warrior. I love having you as an apprentice and I hope to see you become a warrior. Please don't leave us. Palebird needs you." I whispered. I didn't know it but Hareflight was listening but didn't say anything. I lowered my head and drifted into sleep. I woke up later and stretched. Hareflight was waiting outside and as soon as I got out he told me to go and wait by the entrance of the camp. I went out and waited. Hareflight came a couple heartbeats later and said that he heard what I said. "Don't worry Dawnstripe. Tallpaw won't die. He will still be a warrior, but just held back a bit. Well, I have to go. Bye." Hareflight padded away. I thought about what he said and stopped worring. In the back of my mind though was a little nagging feeling of worry.
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Tallstar's revenge: Chapter 22: a rewrite from my head
FantasíaThis is about what I thought could have happened in Chapter 22 in Tallstar's revenge.