Tallstar's revenge: Chapter 22: a rewrite from my head

Chapter 22:Part 9

Dawnstripe's POV

I walked in the medicine den and sat by Tallpaw. "You wish he was awake, don't you Dawnstripe?" I jumped. Hawkheart was squeezing through a hole in his store. "Oh. Yeah, I guess." I answered. I sighed. " I gotta go now. Bye Tallpaw." I whispered in Tallpaw's ear. I slid out and went on patrol to come back later to see cats starting to share tongues. I wandered over to Hareflight and started grooming him. He groomed back and I looked around while licking to see Shrewpaw staring at something. I looked to where he was staring and saw Tallpaw stumbling out into the sunlight. "Tallpaw!" I mewed loudly and happily. Everycat heard me and looked around for Tallpaw. I saw Tallpaw sit down dizzily and heavily. He looked around and flopped down to start grooming. Then he saw Palebird and got and headed towards her. I turned back and shared tongues until Heatherstar called a meeting. I got up and padded into the Meeting Hollow and sat down next to Woollytail. I listened until I heard Palebird yowl "Tallpaw!" Her yowl was filled with fear and anxiaty. I looked back to see Tallpaw shaking violently but still awake. "No! Not again!" I whispered. Only Woollytail heard me. "What do you mean, not again?" Woollytail asked. "I found him and he was shaking violently when I did." I mewed. Woollytail nuzzled me. "It's okay. Tallpaw is strong and he'll make it through." "Thank you Woollytail." I sat down and watched as Barkpaw and Hawkheart anxiosly buzzed around Tallpaw and his mother. They asked for somebody to make a nest for Tallpaw and me and Woollytail volenteered. We came back with nest making stuff and got to work. I put heather under Tallpaw as his mom held him up. Then we pushed heather around his body and weaved it around. Then I walked to a nest and fell asleep after knowing Tallpaw is somewhat comfortable.