Tallstar's revenge: Chapter 22: a rewrite from my head

Chapter 22:Part 6

Dawnstripe's POV

I ran back to where Tallpaw and Shrewpaw were fighting. I smelled Tallpaw's scent heading towards OutLook Rock. I followed the trail there then followed it to the stream into RiverClan terittory. I lost his scent and went back and forth along that bank trying to find it. I then swam across to see if I could find his scent. I found it and followed it to some reeds. Then I heard voices with fear and anxeity in them. I followed the voices and found two RiverClan cats standing over a violently shaking Tallpaw. "WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY APPRENTICE!" I yowled. The cats standing over Tallpaw looked up and said "I don't know what happened. We found WindClan scent and followed it and found him here shaking." The silver one replied.  I ran over to Tallpaw and started nuzzling him. "Wake up. Please, wake up." I murmered. The silver she-cat came over and started licking him to calm him. I joined in while the tabby tom sat watching out for us. Slowly Tallpaw stopped shaking and I said to the she-cat. "Thank you. Can you help me get him to our camp?" They both nodded and I lifted Tallpaw onto their backs. Then we padded to the river and swam over to WindClan side while I was behind them steading Tallpaw. Then we padded to the camp and went through the tunnel. Everycat was staring at us as we came through because they smelled RiverClan. "Dawnstripe. Why did you bring these two RiverClan cats to camp?" Heatherstar asked. "They helped me bring Tallpaw here. There is something wrong with him. When I found him he was shaking violently and these two had found him a couple heartbeats before me." Heatherstar thanked the RiverClan cats and sent an escort with them then turned to Tallpaw. "Let's hope we don't lose Tallpaw. Palebird wouldn't be able to handle it." "I hope so too. I love my apprentice."