The End is Near

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Hi Guys,

So so  sorry!! What has it been? like 9 months since I last updated?!! I really am sorry, but In my defence, I do have a good excuse - I got ABB in my A-Levels because I stopped writing and got revising - so it was kind of worth it.

Anyway... this is not a new chapter as such because I have made the decision to stop writing this story, however; I knew I couldn't just leave it the way things were. So, I've decided to post the plan I had drafted out for the rest of the story, so that you knew the way it was going to go/what would happen.

The plan was brief but I have added extra details, however it is still in note form.

This story was planned from the start, and I know inside out what was going to happen - so please do feel free to comment/message me with any questions you have that are not answered by the plan as it really is not in much detail at all. However, I did try my best to answer and explain everything main/important that would happen.

I hope ya'll understand...


HOW IT WAS SUPPOSED TO GO...


• At the end of the first training session led by Eric where Tris and Al perform CPR and massages on each other for their first aid training, Al he pulls her aside and says he really needs to speak to her about something important – she says that she will speak to him later on...

• He had decided to tell her about his feelings for her after seeing will and Chris happy and in love during the training session.

• Eric also asks Tris to stay behind a few minutes later for a moment and tells her she will be needed after the end of the next session to help him with a job ... he uses the excuse that he needs her to help him because she was in abnegation and that is Important for the role.

• The lads and Christina are hanging about in the canteen after lunch has finished, after the morning training with Eric and Uriah asks Zeke, who is just passing through, when four is to return as Eric is pissing them all off in training.

• He replies only another three days or so...

• Before Everyone else turns up Al says to the lads that later on that night he's going to tell Tris about his feelings as he didn't manage to before (after the training session he thinks she likes him too) – they all agree that she does after seeing they got close, well - all but Christina.

• Tris joins them at the table after nipping off to freshen up, when they are about to leave Al asks Tris to go with him for a minute... Christina interrupts him and claims that she and Tris have to go somewhere else and it's really important

• Will asks what the hell she's doing, knowing she knows what al is about to do and also does she know something he doesn't (she knows about Tris and Four) - but she tells him to keep out of it

• Tris refuses to go until Christina fakes crying and storms off - so Tris follows her out worried and panicking to see if she's okay...

• Christina is fine and said she needed her to come and she knew that would work

• Tris attempts to back inside a little angry at her, but Chris stops her telling her what Al plans to do, Tris is a little shocked but says she plans to let Al down gently.

• They go back inside and Al chickens out of telling her anyway – he just thanks Tris for being a nice friend.

• With Four away, Eric asks Tris for help with a job and during this time he tells her that he knows about the two of them and that she should break up with him as he has an unsavoury reputation with women.

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