Message in a Bottle

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Brent's P.O.V.

Dearest Ruth,

Void spaces around me,

Are not the reason I have an empty heart.

But the callous betrayal,

Has torn me apart.

No amount of love,

Can mend my broken soul.

For now the despair,

Has taken its toll.

Signed,

(The initial letter of your name)


I read out the message from the bottle. At the instant I fell in love with her. It was as if I could feel her grief. I wished she'd been with me and not him. It was crazy, I was falling for someone who I didn't even know the name of.

Suddenly an idea struck my head. I grabbed a pen and a paper and wrote:


Dearest (initial letter of your name)

I fell for your thoughts,

The way you wrote your feelings,

How you made me speechless.

I ache to be inside your mind,

To hear the whisper of every thought,

To get lost in your deepest desires.

I picture you lying down next to me,

Caressing the soft curves of my face,

Running your fingers through my hair.

I don't know how to say this,

Or even if it's true.

But I love the way you make me feel,

And I think I'm falling for you.

Your secret admirer,

Brent.


I put the message into the bottle and tossed it into the water hoping it would reach her.

It did and it amazed me how one bottled note changed my life.


A/N: Sorry I hadn't updated in a while and this is too short. Anyways, Just so you know only the first poem has been written by me so I only take credit for that.I had writer's block but my creative writing class helped me through it. So I guess I'll update more often.Besides that, If you have any feedback/ suggestion/ complaint for us please let us know through the comments below.

ILY ALL. STAY RAD !!

~ May xx



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