First of all, Happy Father's Day!Now, onto the rant
Now, I'm a sucker for some good fan fictions,
But don't you just hate it when there are some pretty sucky fanfictions out there that just succeed?
Also:
It absolutely grinds my gears when people don't make paragraphs! Not even when they do dialogue! UGH! Make the story even people!
Not to mention; the thing that peeves me the most:
"Hey did you hear about the game last night?" Dmitri said. John replied,"Yeah man! It was awesome! Don't you think?" "Well, I thought it was complete bull crap!"
See! The " "
GGDASTLNBDEG
THAT GETS ON MY NERVES SO MUCH! IT'S NIT GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT! LEARN YOUR PUNCTUATION
GAH!
Sorry.