Percy Jackson The Wolf Prince

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•Artemis P.O.V•

I don't like this. I think I know Poseidon will have my head f I return his son in a unhealthy state, he will make sure me or my Huntresses get hurt, I can not let that happen, I will have to nurse him back to health, and mainly his mind and soul is broken, so it won't be that bad... I hope. I walk over to the girls, leaving the wolf in a cage. "Girls, listen up!" I say, standing in front of my companions. "I'm sorry to inform you, that we have to keep care for the wolf for the time being, if we would give Poseidon his son like this, black and blue, and him thinking more like a wolf then a human, we will have to face the wrath of Poseidon." I say, thinking back to when the wolf had tried to escape, and started biting some hunters, I got into his mind, and found mainly animal instincts. "Well at least it isn't fully a male, he's more an animal, so hopefully he will be a little more tolerant." I hear a hunter say, I smile, and say "thank you, not get back to your chores, and I will see if the wolf is awake, hopefully he will shift back to normal."

I walk to the tent next to mine, that is used for when there are visitors -with in this case is the man, Perseus or as he prefers, Percy- I walk into the tent and look to the cage. Why couldn't the crazy animal just stay for a while?
I walk back out of the tent, to the nearest hunter "Lila? Could you tell Thalia that I'm going out hunting? And keep a eye on Zoë please." I say. "Yes my lady" she simply replies, and runs of through camp. I walk back into my tent, and grab my bow and my quiver, knowing that this should better end soon.

I ran through the forest, glancing at the fresh paw prints in the ground. I stop, and look at the paw prints. Fresh. I stood up, and went a little slower, making sure I made no sound. I looked around the open area, where the paw prints led to, and saw my prey a wolf -that was one and a half times bigger then any wolf I had ever seen- with red and black fur, with a burn mark across his face. The wolf slowly moved, and then jumped into the bushes, with me quickly following it, there I saw the wolf was eating a deer, I slowly approached it, until I heard someone. "Stupid animal! That was my prey!" I looked around and saw one of my hunters launch an arrow at the wolf. The moment the arrow got shot, the wolf jumped, away, but got hit by the arrow in its leg. "Lily, you shouldn't have shot that wolf, and now Of back to camp." I say to Lily. "Sorry my lady" she replies and goes back to camp.

I followed the paw prints, till I saw them go into an old shed, that nearly wasn't worth calling a shed. Must of been some mortal that  lived here. I think, when I walk into the shed, making as little sound as possible, as I look to the corner, where Perseus lays, in his wolf from, looking at me. "I only want to help you" I say to him. "Turn into a human, and I will help." I went on. I saw him shift partially, but turn back into a wolf, and after some time, he replied.

"Can't"