You know when you have your OTP and you really want them to get together so you just jump all the important stuff and get them together. Yea well don't do that. Watching the relationship build is one of the things people like myself want to see happen. We don't want a super fast relationship with no build. Try and develop the relationship at a good pace so we don't get bored. Don't go so fast that we sit there and think " You barely knew each other! You can't just start dating right away!" And don't go so slow that we think "This is the slowest pace I've ever seen ever" this doesn't really annoy me as much as it just gets frustratingly unbearable. I'll admit I was no better off when I was a kid. I went to fast for my own good. But I bet if I went back and rewrote my old fan fiction I'd actually be pretty good at developing characters and the story and moving along as a reasonable pace than I was 2 years ago or even last year for that matter.
I'm not trying to tell you what you absolutely have to I'm just saying these are things at annoy and bug me about other people's writing. Saying that aloud I sound like a jerk but I'm honestly trying to get my own feelings out so I don't annoy all my friends ( by that I mean the like 10 that I actually have)
Anyways there's still small rant....I should probably update my Roy/Ed prompts XD there's me being lazy when it comes to something that actually matters again.
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Things that bother me in Fullmetal Fanfiction
RastgeleI don't care if you hate this but I'm positive everyone wants me to stop ranting to them over text so now you guys get to hear exactly what bothers me about the fanfiction in the Fullmetal Alchemist Fandom
