Title: Let Me Love You
Author: @danii_5678
Genre: Fanfiction
Rating: 8.0
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Hey Danii! Let me tell you, your book is seriously captivating. The prologue is well written, foreshadowing just enough to make the reader want to read on. Kudos to you girly!
Love the new cover; it definitely fits the theme of your book better than the one before. (;
You haven’t got any punctuation or spelling issues in your book at a cursory glance! YAY! One thing! When you use quotations, you don’t have to space between them and you have to punctuate the quotation before you close it, whether with a comma, period, exclamation point, or question mark- you can Google this and it will explain it more.
See Below:
⌾ Yours:
“ Fine then just listen to me “ I wait for him to continue.
Correct:
“Fine then, just listen to me.” I wait for him to continue.
So, from the first two chapters, it seems like Mackenzie’s boyfriend is cheating on her. Liam likes her and she seems to be attracted to him, but they maintain a close relationship. The chapters are really good and provide lots of information in a discreet way.
Your book is really good. It has a strong foundation and will definitely be successful. Maintain your confidence as a writer! I’m looking forward to reading on and would love to do another review later on when there’s more material to work with. (:
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