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Review 11 ↠ Wrinkled Sheets

Title: Wrinkled Sheets

Author: @mightea

Genre: Fanfiction 

Rating: 9.0

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Hey, hey Wendy! You are extremely talented with the pen- or keyboard? Your first chapter is amazing, very descriptive, and perfect for reeling people in.

I love your cover, with the crisp lines and simple text. It fits the book just as I imagined. However, I wish your Wattpad username were on it so that people can easily identify you as the author.

I only found a couple of minor typos in the chapter, with no major grammatical issues. There really isn’t much to review yet, so there wasn’t a lot of room for error.

So far I’ve found that Zayn is a flighty subject. He has had some beef with his parents in the past, and is running from something. Making his living off street art and spending the smallest amount of time possible with people, he is trying to make it on his own. Completely. This book seems great, with a really well developed plot for only a prologue and one chapter.

The rating is a 9.0 because, as I said above, you’ve only got one chapter so far. There’s definitely going to be a lot more to this book and I look forward to it. Your writing is very good, with strong writing elements. Also, your story is original. That, in and of itself, is catchy. Thank you so much for letting me review your book and I would love to review again in the future. x