Title: Teach Me to STOP
Author: @HM_MALIK
Genre: Fanfiction/Romance
Rating: 6.5
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Hey HM! I think that your plot idea is pretty good, but you’re only in your first chapter so you never know how much better it’s going to get.
Your cover is really great, but I would suggest you add your username on it. That way people can know who’s writing this great book! The picture of Zayn is pretty fantastic.
There were quite a few capitalization and punctuation issues in the book, which are easy to edit along with a couple of small typos. The major thing I noticed was ‘your’ and ‘you’re’ being mixed up over and over again. When you use ‘your’, it’s dealing with possession. The contraction ‘you’re’ is used in place of ‘you are’, if you cannot put ‘you are’ in place of where you are using the word then you are using the wrong form. Other than that, there aren’t really any issues.
You really aren’t into the story yet, so there isn’t much to summarize or much that the reader knows. However, I think that Malissa’s character is well suited for the role you’ve set up for her. In all honesty, I like where this story is going and would like to see it through.
On to the 6.5 rating I gave your story. Basically, you have a good plot setup. It’s not necessarily original, but it isn’t very familiar either. However, the lack of capitalization and punctuation is frustrating and distracting and takes away from the story. Thank you so much for the request and I would be more than happy to review your story again in the future, once it’s further along. Please let me know what you think below. x
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