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Review 7 ↠ The Paparazzi Project

Title: The Paparazzi Project

Author: @GlamourGurl101

Genre: Fanfiction/ChickLit

Rating: 7.5

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 Well hello there M. I’ll be honest, I was a bit skeptical of your book but you proved me wrong. You’ve done a great job with your plot so far! It’s definitely captivating, I was wishing for more.

Let me tell you, your cover is absolutely adorable. It’s totally fitting to the book, yay! However, you might want to look into moving your name over a little to the right because it’s hard to see against the black. Other than that, your cover is great.

I didn’t find any major spelling or grammar issues in your work. Great job with your punctuation as well. One thing to point out, I would recommend take out the long lists of bullets in between scenes. It breaks up the writing and there really is no point in having them other than to lengthen your story. You could try just skipping a line, adding ---, and skipping another line before starting your new section. Harry’s point of view seems a lot stronger than Clara’s, especially at the beginning. You might want to consider going in and editing her sections. 

So far I’ve found out that Clara is in serious trouble with student loan debt, owing ten thousand dollars within sixth months. She finds a job at a popular paparazzi company and is assigned to One Direction, a band she knows nothing about. Clara runs into member Harry Styles quite a few times and they develop a little start of a relationship. Meanwhile Clara’s roommate is caught between Harry’s friends Josh and Niall.

 M, your book is really good. The reasons why I rated your writing a 7.5: you’re only a few chapters in so you’ve got to have room for improvement, the first few chapters were a little weak and it might be good to go back in a fluff them up a little bit, and your writing is very modern. What I mean by modern is that it’s very freeform. There isn’t a lot of structure and your word choices are in today’s vernacular, not so much a literary view. Your writing is very interesting though, and I want to keep reading. Please keep writing and take my views into consideration. I would be more than happy to review it again in the future. (: