I and You

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Hai guys!
It's a miracle I updated so early~

Guyses, I'd pretty much appreciate it if you'd give me constructive criticism. They would help me anyway, so feel free to do so~

Anyway, enjoy this poem!

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I was the sunlight,
You were the sun,
I was the prickly thorns,
You were the rose,

I was the petals,
You were the cherry blossom tree,
I was the heat,
You were the candle fire,

Then... quite suddenly,

I was the meat,
You were the butcher,
I was the target,
You were the gun,

I was the bacterium,
You were the alcohol,
I was the typo,
You were the backspace.

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400 reads, guyses!
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I'm spasming on the floor from excitement and gratefulness~

I lav y'all~

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