Hai guys!
It's a miracle I updated so early~Guyses, I'd pretty much appreciate it if you'd give me constructive criticism. They would help me anyway, so feel free to do so~
Anyway, enjoy this poem!
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I was the sunlight,
You were the sun,
I was the prickly thorns,
You were the rose,I was the petals,
You were the cherry blossom tree,
I was the heat,
You were the candle fire,Then... quite suddenly,
I was the meat,
You were the butcher,
I was the target,
You were the gun,I was the bacterium,
You were the alcohol,
I was the typo,
You were the backspace.-------------
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Poem Addiction
Poetry"A poet's greatest strength is his words; his greatest weakness is his emotions; his greatest addiction is his paper that is the world he lives in." -Eskay Kitz-