TITLE: Bat-Bogey Hexers
UNDERRATED CHARACTER: Ginny Weasley
AUTHOR: sandpipergirl
CHAPTERS: 106 (finished)
SUMMARY: Ginny Weasley is a bright, vivacious girl born into a loving family. Despite seeming small, and helpless Ginny is like a game of exploding snap: full of surprises. Being able to cast an extraordinary Bat Bogey Hex will become one of them.
Viola Lestrange is the bane of her families existence. Homely and self conscious only thing remarkable about Viola is a gift with animals. And casting extraordinary Bat Bogey Hex.
During their years at Hogwarts, these Bat Bogey Hexers will meet and collide.
REVIEW:
Your portrayal of Ginny is practically perfect. Witty, clever, cheeky, loyal to her friends, you've completely caught the character and have written her the way she deserves to be written.
The only thing that might make her a bit more Ginny-like is to show that she has a sharp tongue which she knows how to use. I don't know if you use this aspect of her personality later on in the story (I didn't read it in its entirety, please forgive me!), and if you do then there's nothing I can really tell you to upgrade.
Good job!
(written by kencbi)
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